I really like the way you structure your songs. The arp is great and probably made the song for me. There's something specific about the mix that I can't really put my finger on. Maybe it's the kick? Also don't really like that weird noise (reverb?) that comes in with the snare. It kind of muddies of the sound. I still loved how you did the build up and breakdown at around 2:00. I really like your style composition wise.