Yeah man this shit could be real deal with a tight bass line :D keep it up as always! Love to hear some vocals also!

Yo this could be tight, but you gotta refine the joint man. Being off kilter sometimes is cool but the how of things is what matters in the end. Never be afraid to revise your shit. If you hear your rhymes and they sound off the beat go back and change them joints. Unless you really meant to do that, in which case, it's a matter of taste

Ya'll got somethin here. Lil bit of bass to add that extra umph (If ya wanna). Just needs polish imo. But who the fuck am I? lol