Wow, they took my nose and this is what it feels like, 5/5 for mood and sound quality.

Interesting set-up to create a narrative.

Focusing more on the dubs though, of which is fairly well produced. First bassline introduced could use some global syncing on the LFO. You lost the sync when it plays the second time 'round. If that was manual LFO, I will concede 'cause it's always gonna be a little off no matter what :)

A lot of the basslines are quite grimey and super tough... but you lack the sub bass to give it impact. That's usually where most of your weight is and you need a lot of that to make it even better. I gotta feel it in my chest if you want to follow up with those kinds of stabs.

Snare is pretty good, hi-hat work is nice and varied. Check the phase of your kick. Sounds like there's more than one sample, and if that's the case, one of them might need to be inverted. It's lacking the thump that there should be.

Otherwise, quite enjoyable. Well done.

-J.P.

I'd like to think that the silly laughter at the beginning is the little kid. He's probably lulzin around in the car or somewhere, when his dad comes and pulls the stolen nose joke, dooming everyone.