I liked it. The forum topic Review of the Review was 3 tracks . unfortunately it's not to my taste . but your track reminded me of the distant past , when I was listening to trance and all the style , I liked the sound - stereo effects , samples (except for the sample voices ) . thanks for nostalgia

This tune has potential to becoming a lot better. I think if you turned off the "overall" reverb fx that sounds like it is a blanket that covers the entire piece, it may sound more desirable. Try using reverb on specific instruments only. Using delay or multi-tap delay is sometimes better than using reverb in certain cases. Essentially, you don't want your piece to sound all "muddy" or drowned out with reverb. Also, the choice of sounds (or the way you are playing it) doesn't sound like trance. Maybe try using more subtle sounds. Well I hope this helps to improve on your next piece. Keep it up!

not even close