Straight up man, great work! Not only that, good beat choice! Next time though you should consider putting the beat higher, and possibly edit out the clicking sounds. A tip that I think would go great for you would be to learn to record parts, instead of just going straight with no breaks. It's only my opinion, but I think it would boost the flow and quality of your tracks!
Above all, good work!
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