Listening to this song, I can easily envision a watery natural landscape littered with gears and other such mechanical parts, that then lead into a factory littered with some natural landscaping. It's quite the surreal experience. Nice job, and keep up the amazing work!

this rendition is awesome...

Never have played fez before but I gotta say this is just so well done. Listening to it I see this as remake rather than take, (like that one reviewer said) but regardless I love how modern sounding it is as a whole :)

it sounds great. I love the chill and calm parts in this song, plus the melody which sounds nostalgic and mysterious at the same time. well done :)

This is a very good track! I played FEZ and I listened to the original soundtrack. Comparing the two ones, I consider this a REMAKE more than some sort of your own take. Nevertheless, there are some things that don't fit with the melody:

1 - The silent parts in the beginning, you could have filled them with FX or sound effects, to have a more complete track and sound design.

2 - The drums, expecially the snare, the should have been louder and more "punchy" because, in my opinion, they're useless, if you can't even notice them when they start.

3 - At 1:00 you could have stopped for like 10 seconds with the Hat, and, using an automation, they could have restarted.

As I said, this track is not a disaster nor bad, you just lacked with the structure and with immagination. As I said before, this is a REMAKE more than an own take made by you, it's lacks on originality. Hope you'll appreciate my review/feedback.