I like the progression, but I feel the main plucky synth was loud at times (0:23) in comparison to other parts (IE the beginning).
It didn't really overwhelm the overall sound and feel of the piece but definitely was a bit on the loud side. Also there seemed to be a lack of fills. The kicks just seemed to come and go and there wasn't very much power leading up to said moments.
Now I understand this is more of a chilled style that has more ambiance to it than dance, if I'm wrong let me know what you were going for.
Other than that, I enjoyed listening to it about 5 times while writing this review. I'll look around your profile for more things to review and you also get a follow from me!