I like the progression, but I feel the main plucky synth was loud at times (0:23) in comparison to other parts (IE the beginning).
It didn't really overwhelm the overall sound and feel of the piece but definitely was a bit on the loud side. Also there seemed to be a lack of fills. The kicks just seemed to come and go and there wasn't very much power leading up to said moments.
Now I understand this is more of a chilled style that has more ambiance to it than dance, if I'm wrong let me know what you were going for.
Other than that, I enjoyed listening to it about 5 times while writing this review. I'll look around your profile for more things to review and you also get a follow from me!
Thanks for the review mate, well the main plucky synth had frequency bends at said places, It sounded right when I was making it. I agree on the beat part, I'm not good at making beats really. But then again I'd consider myself a beginner at music (even after 3 years, music isn't easy)
Love love love love love the beat you used! Awesome stuff! I would have totally given you five stars off the bat if it had a vocalist. The chords are really good and the synths you used are really cool. Reminds me of something really trippy. The high hats are my favorite type; crisp and clear. Listening to the song again, I noticed that the ending was kind of awkward, but overall well executed for the style. The kick is solid and the clapping is cheesy, but fits with the whole appeal you are going for. This is more of a 4.5, but I understand how hard vocalists are to come by so you definitely get a 5/5.
This is definitely adane song!
If only I didn't like I would totally like this!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.