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Kind of repetitive, I liked the way you developed the song and structure, I liked those awesome melodies at 1:14, the kick is better here and i can say that the mastering is pretty good. You could have added more stuff like instruments, melodies, vairations, drum beats and drum alteration effects.... pretty cool though!

aCeta responds:

Repetitiveness is my one and only sin it seems lol.
I definitely need help with that.

I think a pretty ok song, however the main lead could do with more variations,and I kinda miss the bass, I hear it's there but it's so subtle, just sitting in the corner, It would be great if you could make it more dominant. The middle part is great, I like the way you use gating especially at 1:42. Moar bass moar bass, can't stress it enough, other than that and variation of the lead melody It's pretty neat, but not as good as your other previous 2 tracks.

aCeta responds:

I see where you're coming from.

I worked so hard on polish and making it sound professional I've kinda laxed on the most important things of music. Because of it I've lost my talent for variation and constant change.

Tis the whole reason I came to Newgrounds. Since switching from NG to Soundcloud 2ish years ago, music has kinda died out for me, and I don't want that to happen. I need good feedback and input from others to continue this with the quality I need and the sound everyone wants.

Thanks for the review, and don't hesitate if you're a musician and would like to slap some ideas together.

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Credits & Info


4.70 / 5.00

Jan 9, 2015
8:29 PM EST
File Info
3 MB
3 min 20 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.