The clap needs work.. It's too noisy in my opinion (although it may be my Beats audio). Also the sub is loud as hell in the first 20 seconds or so. This is a big room house song, not trance. This genre would be a lot better in a live setting in my opinion. Unless you plan to play it at a live setting or just love to make this particular genre, it's not one I'd recommend. Also, it's a bit repetitive. Try to change it up here and there. Not particularly my style, however, you did have nice progression and arrangement. Keep it up!