Nice work! I wasn't convinced with the low-pass intro, but it got better. You're sticking with a small palette of timbres throughout the tune, which would be my main complaint. The drums are super punchy and the synths are pretty soft. Try switching things up a bit in the interest of dynamics? You almost head in that direction at the end with the saw-bass being very staccato, but you don't follow through. Another thing would be that the tonality gets a bit tired after a couple minutes. Try lowering the intensity more dynamically, and perhaps modulating to another key or mode. You might surprise yourself.
Keep up the good work, your stuff has promise! :)
Thank you for the instructive review! I usually don't released songs that I haven't put much time in it like this one but I'm glad I did, since I had such an accurate review.