I really like the tune has its own flavour. its a killer tune
Nice track! I dig your flows. nothing to complain about the rap parts. the sounddesign is at times a little rough and sounds too uninspiring. try to beef up your drum loop a little make it stand out, put some stank on it! the chordsound especially sounds really dull in my opinion. I think you could have mixed everything a bit clearer it clutters a little in the low mid frequencys. also your choise of effects and the "paranoia sample" seem kind of odd and unproffesional to my ears but I don't dwelve in rap a lot so keep that in mind. also the ending is just a cut in my opinion which you could have executed better probably with a reverb tail or a builddown or something like that.
overall nice track make the sounddesign a little more diverse and change things up a bit more and you got yourself a killer tune.
Sounds like you got some inspiration from a certain thread in General with that intro there. :> Lyrically, it sounds awesome, but the beat is kind of whack. Everything sounds too close to the vocals and it makes the whole mix sound kind of muddy. I think you should try to pan out the instruments a little more and scoop some of the frequencies so the vocals have more room to pop out, since they're usually the main focus in hip-hop.
Out of personal preference, I would suggest using a little compression on the drums so they don't sound as...lazy, I guess is the best word to describe it. Keep at it, man!
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