This sound looks the same as Runescape ;p
Did you made this all in your own?
I think you copy'd the sound.
You have a fairly good songs here I just found the strings in the beginning a bit strong. You kept a fairly good even tone in this song I like it. I just think you ended it a bit soon I thought it would be good if you would carry it on a bit more then fade off. I give it a 5/5.