"like a lemon up here" kinda threw me off
This reminds me of "Summertime" by Kreayshawn, only less focused on "[my] bitch"
Also, I may be a little more partial to this song right now because it's cold, and damn if I wasn't just talking about wishing summer lasted all year long.
Your vocal equipment is still hurting you a little, making your voice sound a little bit boxy/tinny. May look at a few tutorials to manage that with a multiband compressor or something. I've been looking into that lately.
Nice little outro footnote. Rarely see concise ones like that in hiphop that rhyme.
I'd like to see more of these. Feel free to cop a beat whenever, man. :)