Sounds ok. I'd say it needs more pads, like overlaid with the brass at the start, and on the saw. And also better mastering would be awesome, maybe lower the master gain so the bass doesn't overtake much of the mix, or just lower the bass slightly. I have no complaints on the intermediate parts with the pianos and pads and stuff. ;)
I actually slowly add more and more pads as the mix goes on; but it definitely needs something at the start. The bass overtaking the mix slightly was deliberate (it's automation) - the original does this too, and I wanted to accentuate it. Probably overdid it, though.