This is amazing! The song is great but I would recommend adding side chain. Other than that, great song and great production work!!
Note: This is yet another WIP!
Thinking of adding lyrics soon.
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During night it troubles me,
the familiar face I cannot see
She creates, he destroys, this soporific absentee
A friend to whom I pledge my life
For without them, who would I be?
This is amazing! The song is great but I would recommend adding side chain. Other than that, great song and great production work!!
Dude, YES! Once you brought that synth with vibrato in with the beat you completely sold me on this WIP. It sounds like some of the music that plays in my head that I never write down because I forget it later.
Don't breath into your vocals, though. Like you are going, "hhhooou," when you should be going, "ooou." I understand that this could have been a stylistic choice (as I have done in the past, just to put more air into the sound) or this is an instance of a very common mistake made by singers just starting out, but either way it does not work for this song in my opinion. It's sharp and annoying.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.