very nice(as always :D)
^^ whoot, loved it, if there's another batch o music, feel free to send a mail.
it doesn't mean that I don't review it, I didn't listen to it; thats just me being to lazy to write :P
now about the song,
basicly the piano is pretty good, though the bass could get a bit of a boost, twinkle around a bit with the overal lowest notes of the piano that they would echo a bit longer(but don't let the other notes lose there speed by that,try to let the rest untouched or change them a bit), and maybe a bit deeper to.
5's are blng2u
I wanted to drop by. You have a few new pieces, I wanted to show my support. I also forgot that you are also a capable composer :D! Whenever I thought of your name I just remember kid being beaten with a puberty stick.
First thing that comes to mind for this song.
Good choir work! Nice and subtle, and much deeper then what I usually hear (probably cuz deep choirs are so hard to find). If I am not mistaken you also have a solo female voice layered on top of the choir. It was hard to distinguish, but it was there. In either case, you must share with me where you got these choirs! Give >:(!
Lets talk abit about the mood of the song. It's dark, and tense, but in my eyes, it wasn't driving enough for a "kill them all!" kind of atmosphere. However I also recall that you work for an audio book store (or so I think), having recently scored for a radio play myself I realize that having distracting, overpowering melodies takes away from the speaker, and I can picture this with a story being told over it quite well.
I would also think perhaps a change of instruments. The piano I did not think conveyed enough anger. Perhaps play some chords on that piano way low on the octave scale, some louder brass in the background. Some more distinguished snares maybe?
Regardless, it was quite enjoyable. I was also thinking organ, but this worked great too. 5/5 from me GodSpeedIam, really glad to see you still submitting every once in a while, keep me up to date.
I'd like you to check out some of my new stuff sometime, thanks for your time ^^.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.