I'm Prolly gone Hear This On The Radio Soon!!!!

This is **star** quality material dawg!!
these the kinda' beats they gone be freestylin' to on 106 and park and rap city: the bassment, u doin' big things nigga!!! oh, and what the name of the program u use to make yo fire son???

shit..

yo dawg.. this is some good shit you got here. great voice you got. the strings were so cool. your da #1 like i said in my other review. your good as shit. Curse those ass haters!

-ES-

likin this dawg

I'm jammin to it right now freestylin to it and shit keep doin shit like this...

don't stop man the haters ain't

Fuck Tha Haterzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz MOVEMENT MUTHAFUCKERS

~DA Hip Hop Legend~

~Reven~

~1~

Great.. But

the beginning sounded like a kid playing on a piano. lol. fix that. let me help you.

1. Put in some roll with a beat in the beginning and THEN put the hole melody in.

2. When the strings come in keep it as 1 note. That will sounds awesome.

3. Make it a litle bit slower. Then it would be a complete Hip - hop track.

Use these tips. Check out some of my stuff if you have time.

Q-Bix

woo!

loved the strings!
epic like you said.
good beat to hold everything together.
and the bells just added that darkness to it.

check my latest.. most of my shit is techno but i drop a little hip hop every once in a while.

i2