Entertaining
Well I have to say this one is very entertaining has some interesting ideas and you push them forward kinda made me laugh at times so it's all a good thing and honestly this is an original piece of yours so I don't feel like you need any changes here but it's a great track with good entertaining value so keep up the good work
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one but if anything make more like this
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