Wow! That was awesome! I can see what everybody else means about the kick and the fade at the end, but it was just a minor drawback. This melody REALLY gets me going! it's just so.....so good! I still don't understand how to make a good melody though. How do you do it? (If it's not too much trouble, do you think you can PM me about that? I could use some tips on that.)

I like this track, but you could've spiced the kick a bit more up. But that doesnt mean that you have to give it a hardcore kick or something, oh no.

Just make the kick a bit more noticable.

I did like this though ^^

gotta love this and boii i do <3
the only minor thing i didnt like is when the kickdrum sort of fades when the bass gets more body near the end of this piece.