I really like this. Reminds me of something from Skyrim or an Elder Scrolls game. I don't really see anything wrong with it that needed to be changed. It did the job that it set out to do.

I really like the sense of dread that you get once the double bass starts to play and then the drums playing the marching beat really gives an impression of what it would be like to walk up to the chopping block.

Well done.