Lyrics:
Beneath the sea, lurking ominously. There is an evil that's beckoning me.
Deeper and deeper, I swim endlessly. Unsure of what the shadowy terror could be
blacker than black, I could not forsee. The blasphemous creature before me.
I fell on its gaze, now a servant to thee. My cancerous master, what do you wish of me?
Without a reason, I'll stalk on the land. I'll search for a victim, who'll die by my hand.
Their flesh is my prize, so sweet and so pure. I'll think not a thing of the pain they'll endure.
blacker than black, I could not forsee. The blasphemous creature before me.
I fell on its gaze, now a servant to thee. My cancerous master, what do you wish of me?
waiting for nightfall, emerging soon. Paving my path by the light of the moon.
What have I become, What evil am I? How many victims must violently die.
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Note the ending would have had a really cool feel good ending if we had someone who could actually sing, since the song ends on a pretty happy sort of vibe. So just keep that in mind if you think the lyrics are too dark. Anyways me and a friend wrote this. I did most the mixing, recorded guitar and vocals myself. And my friend did the drums and keyboard parts. This was a really fun song to write and record and I hope some of you guys like it.
If not leave me some feedback and help me improve!
Thanks for the listen! :D
I could enjoy listening to this =)
Just the way it is, Very creative and I love the piano near the beginning when the vocals come in (15sec mark)
But as Ricori suggested. I would love to hear more smooth vocals AS WELL AS the ones you have going now =) Keep it up
May I ask, How did you record this?
Guitar parts specifically?
Hey thanks! I used an old Line 6 UX1 Toneport with a Xiphos XPT700 tuned to Drop C, recorded it in Reaper as well.
Thanks for the listen :D
overall the song isnt all that bad but you could die down with the heavyness with your vocals try a smoother approch to it like slipknot there a few song they have that have the smoothness to their vocals and then build up to the end because i dont want yall to kill ur vocals like this XD
That's a pretty good suggestion, I will try it out. Thanks :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
JDawg00100 
