The Aquamarine Submarine

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The Aquamarine Submarine

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Definitely an improvement upon my other work. Please comment and criticize.

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The-XI

2006-07-05 17:15:47

Very FXey like.

The beginning was nice, with the distorted synth rising up. But, the song is distorting, and I can't hear any percussion other than some hats. Heres some advice: Instead of turning UP your instruments volume so you can hear the other instruments, turn them down, so the ones that you so desperately need to hear are a little louder. Then the song won't red-line =) Then, on the master FX channel, plop on an FX channel. It'll make everything smooth.

Since I heard no percussion due to volume problems, can't relaly comment on it. The melodies I heard were nice though. Try not to clutter your songs... only have a bassline, melody, and a pad going (AT MOST) or else the song is going to clutter, and then you can't ehar anything other than what is loudest.

You can make some amazing music, so go out there and do it! Impress the world =) Keep it up! Could you do me a favor and check out my music and leave some reviews? I'd really appreciate it =D

WoolyWatamelon responds:

hey, thanks for the helpful feedback! I definitely agree that there is a little much going on in my song, I was originally going to change that, but i wasn't quite sure what to get rid of. Now, i will definitly do my best next time to make sure that the melody doesn't crowd the percussion and basslines, but to be honest, all i had in this song were cymbals kicks, and claps, no actual drumming. I will definitely check your work very soon.