Sounds about how i started...pretty good though..
Your music isn't crappy... just put some more divercity in it... that would make it better...... anyway i'm wondering what music program your using..
I use FL studio 6 XXl its a good program, i suck at making music and still it sounds good =P
Go practise some more and you'll become the best!!!
THX for the comments ...to the people i sent priv messages to sorry i didnt see that i could do it this way im kinda new lol but the programs i use are the EJAY series www.ejay.com and Atomix virtual DJ for remixing