I like the idea, but I feel as if it is lacking in direction. The melodys seem monotonous and the effects seem too loud in comparison to the moving lines.
I think if you added some different drums with varying grooves and fills that lead into new sections it will completely change the feel of the song. As a drummer I think the drums can definitely create a completely different atmosphere by changing the groove.
Hey there's no need to give me 1 fucking star and just leave "wtf" if your not gonna review anything at all. Please try not to be a dick and give CC.