Sounds very good! I think sometimes the snares of hats could be removed to put more focus on the rest of the music, as stated before, but apart from that very good! Blends very well together, which is something good songs should have. Good luck with your future works!
If this is the first song you've ever made, I'm very impressed. Everything blends very well together. There are some percussion issues as stated before, but that can be fixed with time.
In any case, this was a very pleasant listen, and a very impressive first song :)
Keep it up!
I'm flattered by your compliment thank you.
Hopefully by the time I grow up as an artist I can finally be on par with deadmau5...............
But for now I just gotta keep making music
This is pretty neat, you've mentioned you're aware of your mastering so I won't harp on that too much - the 1st kick (0:33) needs to be powered up, and the 2nd one (1:55) is clipping I believe. They may actually be the same kick, responding differently to the rest of the mix I'm not sure. The snare and hats also sound a little close-up (they need to be mixed in more).
On the good side however, this is a neat bunch of ideas and quite easy to listen to. Have you ever listened to Chicane? It sounds reminiscent of em! Work on the mastering and you'll have something pretty nice here.
Yes thank you for the respond.
I was a little worried of what happened to the mix down coming to the snare and hats. On the kicks your speculation was right I use the same kick twice so before I master it I might have to fix it up on the kicks department. Also I feel like I have to make a new drum pattern as well hopefully, this would happen.
Thanks for the Critic it very well appreciated
Hopefully my first song will come out well after I'm done mastering it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.