Fun song and interesting to listen to. I have to admit, it doesn't make a lot of sense to me musically, though. I'll throw out a couple suggestions that I would like to see for your piece here:
1.) The percussion sounds out of sync at the beginning and in places throughout the track.
2.) I can't tell what key the song is in - try figuring out a chord progression and melody that stays within a certain scale.
Like I said, it sounds a little weird, but it was fun to listen to. I do like many of your choices as far as samples. Your 'wubs' sound decent too. I hear potential in you. =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.