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An old track from 2009 I think... I've been meaning to post it up for a while :P I thought I'd lost it actually...
Also, I kind of love the chord progression I made...so excuse the overuse :d I think it loops decently, although it didn't come out as nice as some of my previous tracks.

So, I won't be editing this any time soon, I think I'd still appreciate some feedback and tips, if you have happen to have any. Just plain thoughts will do, as well. :) Enjoy!

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Awesome track! I'll say right away that my field is heavily in the VGM so I'm probably not the best judge.
But anyway I feel like it would need a clear melody earlier on. Piano starts now at 2:35 but I found that I was anxiously waiting for that clear non-delayed melody as early as 0:55 when the track calms down.
Nothing much, just something to anchor my focus when listening, if you get what I mean :)

I also love the progression here, it doesn't get boring at all, instead you keep waiting where will it go next. Awesome job at that!

alternativesolution responds:

Oh, thank you for your review! As for having a melody, I will take your input into consideration when creating similar tracks in the future. I am glad you like the progression :)

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Apr 10, 2013
9:22 AM EDT
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6.1 MB
3 min 49 sec

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