Cool. Just two thing: USE MOAR REVERB for god sake :D Almost every your track doesnt have enought.
And the second one: You side-chained it too hard I guess :-/

Melody and bass was cool tho :) Just the lead could really use more reverb ;)

The synths in the intro be so tasty! and the melody throughout reminds me of the track I just finished honestly. I feel like your low end frequencies could hit SO much harder though and it would turn this into a KILLLLER track, like the kick snare and bass could bump up the volume of the low end compress it so It really punches because as is it gets hella lost. Your bass/low end synth really need that low frequency punch as well. also get some FX and rev cymbals to fill in the builds to make the drops all that more epic

All together I really enjoyed your mid/high range synths and melodies and the way you layered in different lines in your progression! Keep it up! Maybe just buy some better headphones or listen to some established artists and just focus on how their sub level sounds.