I quite liked this loop. It has a very smooth transition from the end back to the beginning, and its got pretty good build up. However, I feel as though it could do better if you added a little more variety to the middle of it. It isn't quite able to hold my attention during the middle bit (0:19-0:36 in particular)
Yeah I know about the attention part. It was supposed to, I actually fixed it, maybe I should have uploaded the finished thing.
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