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Author Comments


Good luck to my competitor Waterflame! Congratulations to everybody involved, there's nothing like sharing a whole bunch of new great music within a short amount of time, and receiving incredible feedback from all the kind, helpful, and honest judges. NGADM totally gave me a chance to improve on everything I wanted to work on. I was never able to scrape up the motivation until now, and learning all these new things motivates me to write more after this anyway.

And another thing: THANK YOU CAMOSHARK. For helping me out here and on Fly me to Blue earlier. Here, he provided the trumpet and sax player for this song, and was a big help during the finishing touches. Please, listen to his genius music, he's out of this world:

http://camoshark.newgroun ds.com/

Thanks everyone! Hope you like the track! c:


Way too wicked and wild
The second from the sun is the closest thing to hell,
You will suffocate! You'll suffocate!

Far, far from feeling the flame
But close enough to melt on the second from the sun
We will lose our minds! We will wisp away!

At least the shame is gone

To violate our precious preservation
Pack us in a shuttle and send us toward the sun,
But not all the way!
There's a quicker way..

Does anybody even deserve to live?
Second from the sun answers with her deadly pressure
Crushing all aboard
Crushing all of man

Breathe all the oxygen you can and
Enjoy another sun tan before we bite the dust
If I'm literal..

Luckily the love you loathe'll leave
Searing in the clouds, you'll just fry all your emotions
And cease to exist!

War went so sour
Bombs burnt the land
We failed our sons, we were so wrong
Relied on god to save us

Fly toward the sun
Leave this wasted land
Fire will take you anyway
Venus take us

At least our death is quick to come out here

God gives you the confidence to die
Otherwise you'd be the loser who loves the life he has
Is that so backwards?
Does it matter now? Ooo!

Sound, sound asleep in seconds flat,
We will die a hasty death thanks to all of those who tried
To save their soul!

Way too wicked are we
We're parasites
Exploring, devouring..

My heart begs Venus
To reach out and
Take us


Rockopera just great.I think you had the feeling that you song needed the trumpet and or the saxophone.
Fact is it didn't you could have used guitars at that point or piano to that would have kept the song in style for me. The trumpet part felt to slightly different than the rest.
Anyhow it is a huge piece that i really like! It is absolutely great!
Good Job!

I don't think this is too off the wall to be on the radio at all. Queen? Bohemian Rhapsody anyone? You continue to be one of the most talented artists on this site. Please don't limit yourself by thinking just because most people are stupid that this could never break onto radio. It can.

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Kor-Rune responds:

Bohemian Rhapsody is pretty nuts..

Thank you for giving me hope, Senator. <: I won't give up. <3

This is totally amazing! you should be out there on the radio, making millions by now.
i cant seem to find one single flaw with this track, its really interesting, well produced, variated and original.

Good luck in the finals! you bastard. >:C

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Kor-Rune responds:

You're the bastard!

Naw this stuff is too off the wall to ever be radio'd. I wish. :C

Thank you for the review, and good luck!

Truly amazing and inspiring AS ALWAYS!

Kor-Rune responds:

Thank you Rob!

Fantastic. I wish I could say more.

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Credits & Info


4.48 / 5.00

Oct 21, 2012
8:14 AM EDT
General Rock
File Info
12.9 MB
7 min 2 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.