wicked

Bloody excellent riffs! Just add some drums, and fiddle with the clarity if you can. I know you said you had shitty equipment..but there is awesome potential in these riffs! I like it man.\m/
You can download other programs and try them out too. Good luck, man. Look forward to this when you get it all figured!

grungy

youv got the sound perfect just up the clarity and your set .

Too..........................Slow

Hey if you spead it up and had it a little closer together it would be grand.