Very good but a bit too fast paced, The Dragonborn Comes by Malukah should be a helpful guideline to find the proper pace for this song but as I said everything else is perfect the pronounciation of the dragontongue, your voice is also perfect for this song, I can see alot of effort was put into the making of this song and I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it. |||_|||
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This is another variant of another bard piece that I have been working on for a Skyrim mod. I had designed it to be played as a bard in a tavern...just drum and vocal. In this version, I added strings, brass and a flute. I am also playing a djembe. Not the typical drum choice of the Nords, but it is similar to what they use in the taverns....and a drum is a drum I say. xD Anyway, sorry for the bad equalization and whatnot....I'm just bad at it. Never will get any better, even if I were to really dedicate myself to learning it, lol. xP
You can listen to the version with just my vocal and the drum here: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/
16892419/Music/dragonborn example.mp3 (remove spaces)
ok, well. this is a hard review to make. i think your voice is perfect, but you sonded rushed and out of breath. as well as swallowing your words and lacking inflection. it was a little hard to understand but still very good. i suggest you just slow down and enunciate. then it will truly deserve 5/5. but untill then 3.5/5
Truly amazing. Like many have said before, your voice fits perfect. Excellent work.
Jessismith responds:
Thank you, Sl1d3R . :D
WOW why cant a beautiful voice be in the game like that
Jessismith responds:
Thanks buddy. :)
You sure you did not come out of skyrim or are you just that talented.
Jessismith responds:
Aww, thank you! I wish I had come out of Skyrim....so I could go back and live there forever. :)
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