Sounds like your trying to hard on the vocals man, but cant wait to hear a finished version.
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This is just a demo
The name of my band is Anatta, we will nearly record studio versions.
Here's some advice. Get yourself a small digital porta-studio and multi-track your songs. Your song is crying for distorted guitar, drums and the whole bit. This song really has potential. You could almost see Kurt Cobain singing this on a chair in some smoky, one-night-stand bar. Keep on..
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
