Good

Part 1 is way better

If at first you don't succeed...... This is Aaliyah.. Nice.

I like it

I thinki heard the other part abit ago, but must say you gave this one somewhat of a differant feel, i still say you could add some "EDGE" to this with more build up and i think i mentioned that to you last time, but anyways you do have another nifty tube here and i was personally glad to have checked this out, so nice job, i could for sure see this used on some other flash piece maybe a dance scene of some sort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More edge more build up, it has a dance feel so go with that and let it shine.

LOL

EPIC SONG!!! I WUBsIT
I IZ GUNNAH RISREN TRU IT EBERY DRAY.

Anyone notice how submission #499 is prt 2 and 501 is prt 1?