wonderful!

i really enjoyed this piece. it does seem something is missing... i cant place it... but its still a wonderful composition.

wow

wow, this is a beautiful piece. but u mentioned something missing? i'm no music buff, and God knows i can't even figure out how to work my fruity loops program but hopefully u dun mind this suggestion. mebbe the part yur looking for might be a sort of like flute like instrument playing a faster tune but now loud enough to overshadow the rest of the piece. something that stands out from the rest of the piece? it could be slightly offbeat beat, or you could jus put a lof 8th and 16th notes to make it sound fast. also it could also be harmonizing with the rest of the music. not quite fitting in, but fitting in nonetheless. anyway it's jus a suggestion and you don't have to do it if you don't wanna. i jus wanna say that this reall is a beautiful piece. it would really be perfect if it was just a little bit longer.

this is freaking awesome

i love this, it's practically perfect. you should definetly make a longer version. it would be good in a flash war related, maybe about a POW.

Hmmmm

This is already good but I think it's missing something too. One thing however that most people would complain about is the length, you need to lengthen it. While you're lengthening it, it's good to give it a slow ending rather than a sudden ending. What would probably improve this piece is that maybe it's better if you replace the MIDI or whatever in the background with a violin. This piece reminds me of the Russians rather than medieval times by the way.

Great job!

Well no wonder you can't figure out what's wrong with this it's already very good, if not perfect. Could be a little longer though, but still a great song. Good for some medival flash clip about an invade army or somrthing like that. That was good, hope you make more. I like this kind or orchestral/classical, very nice job.

5/5

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