Keep trying

I think you're trying to put too many ideas in this song.

You need to take it back to basics. For starters, the hats at the start were actually quite cool, but the kick and snare loop you've got going on are buried WAY too low in the mix.

In techno, you absolutely have to have a strong, powerful kick.

Don't try and get too fancy with chords and harmonies. Simplify your song and give it a consistent, strong bassline.

Try just using two different notes in a simple 1 bar bass loop. You'll find it turns out far better to just keep things simple and direct.

Good luck on future productions!

Uh... exactly what am I hearing?

You have alot of pads playing different sounds.... its kind of hard to listen to if you're not a kid... I like the first drumloop though... hopefully you created it yourself. also DrillinB170 is an old drumloop... Honestly this is a hard piece to listen to...

Change those pads to something else bro. add some slayers or a piano to give it a more life like experience...