Your songs seem bare for reviews

so have a few.

The drums in the beginning are setting a nice rythym, but I'd like to hear some more synth in the beginning.

How come the quality is so low? I can't really hear everything that great...

The arp you brought in did the track some good. It would've been hotter if you faded that in the beginning, instead of havig nothing but percussion.

About the drums, you should consider altering them instead of using the mother sound. Slap on some FX, screw with the wavelength, have fun.

Good work, I hope the beswt for you in the future. Keep it up! Could you drop by my audio page and leave a review or two? I'd appreciate it =)