You are almost there with this one! If you fix what these two guys before me have commented on, you will be on the right track! I can't wait to hear how this one turns out. I already love it so much! It's a great up-beat piece.
I need to agree with the previos reviewer, the instrument at around 0:06 is to repeatitive. I cut the song a bit for my video so it fit great, but you really notice it when listening longer to it.
Otherwise it was very good.
I think the instrument that starts playing at 0:06 is a bit too repeative because it plays through the whole track. And you can only barely hear it at 00:31 - 1:40, so you should either make it louder or the other instruments quieter.
That instrument starts to sound repeative at 1:40 - you should add slight variation to it at that point. :p
Overall I enjoyed the track, it has a nice feel to it. Can't wait to hear the new version, if this is WIP? Well anyway, keep up the good work. :)
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