I don't know what you think this could be missing. This sounds uber legit to me. However, if you did want to try something unexpected listen to the Inner Universe remix from Ghost in the Shell on youtube. Adding a voice such as that may give you ideas up until 1:47 of your song. Keep up the good work.
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Fourth times the charm?
Anyway, I'm not sure this is an example of my best work. Seems to be missing something.
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