Damn this is dope.
Nice beat and nice versers. Go on and keep it up.
i love that one short but gets the point across.. keep up the good work
nice lil story rap here. i like.. 5d. Keep up!
Your rap is very insightful so very good job there! Your lyrics were gold. I read them while reading and they are very realistic and gets on an emotional level. Now the problem in the song I hear is the flow you use for the words. It feels somewhat dry in my opinion. See if you can work on that or try another background beat.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.