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The Stick Up

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Song by: Grimcredible
Lyrics by: Grimcredible
Beat by: IDK

Enjoy.

"Listen man, gimme the cash fast! or sleep on the floor."
"Please sir, we don't make much at this grocery store."
I loaded the 4 and said "I didn't ask you that. Just pass the stacks
or get smacked in front of ya kids and your fat fuck whore."

The little man shit his pants and With great haste,
he passed the cake and I dipped right out of the place.
headed back to the block to the spot. Got in and turned the locks.
Grabbed a few glocks and out through the fire escape.

Back down to the parkin lot. Passed n***ahs sparking rocks.
Marked by retarded cops. Damn, I Shoulda shot that fuck.
Now I got these jakes on my ass, chasin me.
Grand theft auto's my next crime. This shits amazin me.

I hid around the corner til the next red light.
Pulled out the rachet on the first car and got a fresh ride.
I sped like an animal right through pelham parkway.
Took a left through bronx park and headed to Frank's place.

Hook~ 2x
This a stick up, mutha fucka. So, shut up and get robbed!
Tryin to be a hero gets your mask blown off!
Hand the cash over and I don't wanna hear shit either!
Don't try nothing funny or you'll be sleepin in the freezer.
Hook~ 2x

Got to Franks hood and he already knew the deal.
His drive thru rose up like the bat cave, that shit was real.
I Drove in and parked. and I Hopped out my ride.
He invited me in and passed me a cold glass of ice.

We sat down. I told em the plan. The shit was fun.
Told em jake is busy. Pinx's men had no where to run.
Stocked wit guns, called the crew and got into 2 whips.
drove up to his spot we ran straight into his shit.

Hit two n***ahs. we hopped out and startin shootin.
N***ahs was not ready. The sound was like beautiful music.
Bullet-proof plan. It was a perfect ambush.
After the Deed was done, Our hands shook.

"Come on!! Take everything thats worth! Find the fuckin Stash!"
"Hurry up before the feds arrive! Them n***ah is Fast!"
"We done got these n***ahs good. Load the fuckin whip!"
Sirens were getting Louder. It was bout time we dipped.

Hook~ 2x
This a stick up, mutha fucka. So, shut up and get robbed!
Tryin to be a hero gets your mask blown off!
Hand the cash over and I don't wanna hear shit either!
Don't try nothing funny or you'll be sleepin in the freezer.
Hook~ 2x

The Feds showed up.. and we was back on da car chase.
We had shit ready, we can't go back to our place.
Hit up Mack. Told em to get the copter set.
No questions, he told us get here and to use our heads.

So, we headed through 180th. Zoomin like mad quick.
Pulled over in bathgate, Where Mack had ran shit.
We ran through the bodega. Exit out through the back.
Hit the stair case to the roof. N***ahs was on track.

met mack at the top.. but the police was dumb deep.
n***ahs had swat cars and shit. They was odee.
It did't matter to us. Load da loot. we off dis.
N***ahs aint know wat happened. The meetin of 3 bosses.

Next stop mexico, til shit die down
They was clueless of whos responsible. Safe and sound.
Think twice before you fuck with Respect. You will die.
We chillin in the bahamas wit shawtys so flyy.

Hook~ 2x
This a stick up, mutha fucka. So, shut up and get robbed!
Tryin to be a hero gets your mask blown off!
Hand the cash over and I don't wanna hear shit either!
Don't try nothing funny! You'll be sleepin in the freezer.
Hook~ 2x

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RESPECT...

As the No5 says and as I voted...respect

Murdaa responds:

Gracias. Real over FAKE!!

Not even a HipHop fan, now I'm stickin' for da man

Well presented, the lyrics really do tell the story (and after
reading some of the comments and your responses, this
fits nicely with your attempt).

Now, as I don't listen to much HipHop/Rap, the background
beat didn't feel 100% to me. The change-up for the chorus
was good, however during the versus it kind of stayed the
same. Maybe amp up the sound for the harsher aspects
of the lyric rolls and possible add some sound effects (low
key of course).

Still, I listened to this a couple times and I can roll with this.
Great job!

Murdaa responds:

i know what chu sayin.. it woulda been good wit some sound effects... but i didnt want to over crowd the verses cause i wanted people to listen to the verses since they're what tell the story.

too scared to say something bad

So u get a 10 o.o

Murdaa responds:

lmao! im glad thats the vibe u get

Alright.

The overall message is good, but you don't need as much swearing as you put into the track to get the same message. The swearing doesn't make the song, it's the content that you put in it. I think only using the swearing to amplify the intensity of something that's chill. I got nothing against the use of swearing, but sometimes it's not necessary and it can be actually better to not use the swearing, after all it would reach a bigger audience. That's just my though. Obviously this is your music and you can do as you please, just thought i would input that.

Murdaa responds:

i understand what yur saying..... BUUUT.. this was kinda meant to be looked at as a MOBSTER song... and Mobsters are known for their crazy way of speaking. like in Casino.. or Goodfellas.. so.. the cursing fits in just right. i mean ofcourse the song will be limited to certain audience.. but thats how Hiphop changed so drastically. and im all about the old hiphop. That Real Music. and if i gotta change to be big.. then im not changing. EMINEM swears alot in his music and he became the best rapper IMO. If your into breaking barriers u do whats different.. and thats what im all about..

Awesome

you should make a rap CD , did write the lyrics yourself because they are mad .

Murdaa responds:

Http://Grimcredible.Bandcamp.com

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May 17, 2011
4:41 PM EDT
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3 min 39 sec

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