Seems kind of emotionless to me, honestly. The drums are too abrasive for a somber beat, but the melody is too somber for something more aggressive. This beat gets stuck somewhere in the middle and I don't like it. You could have put in some bass for more of that aggression or toned the entire thing down and used a lot of fading and ambiance for something gentler.

Very different drums, which fit well. I like it when people fit in different sounds. Also, great progression.

Nice beat! Quick freewrite after it began. Keep up! 5d and downloaded.

Klazik

im running and hiding before i become sacrificed
and im dodging and diving due to the bullets flying by my site
im telling ya this hostile settings reached new heights
im confiding in ya because i see death and he's causing me fright
/i pray a night that i dont become another senseless victim
i stay in the light specifically so that death doesnt stricken
but his likeness likes staying in shadows all slick being dim
ya cant even fight him, he goes click and make ya cringe at a whim
/its so sim for him to pick me to leave off this earth in a breeze
and leave my life a memory, long gone, its treachery
its pestering, and all of these dark thought have been festering
prolly taking the taker closer to take my life without questioning
/I elect that I need lecturing to help me and develop me
Because hellish things just keep enveloping me
Im a shell of a man, it aint grand
I think horrificness has been instilled and about brand

This is decent. The drums need work, but overall it hand a pretty dope tune. Check some of my stuff out! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/475780

It's dope, But one thing I've notice a lot here on NG with audio is, there not enough variation of the beat. Adding like a phase in there some where will make the beat more interesting. And also where is the bridge come in? Is there a hook to it? These are some of the things you should keep in mind when making a beat. Overall though, dope stuff. Keep the fire coming along.