I Don't Get It.
It's okay, although I'm a little confused about the overall concept - this seems way too dreary to be a song simply mourning summer. The lyrics aren't great, they'd probably sound better on a more appropriate beat, how long've you guys been spitting?
Anyway, to summerise, the topic is a little misconstrue with the tone of the beat and vocals. I'd also get rid of the lofi effect on the vocals and hit the beat with more feeling, sounds simple but take my word for it, it'll make a world of difference, get intouch if you want to talk about it some more - got a track on my page for you to check out, same sorta theme; I guess.
thanks for the review im gonna check out ur track now lol.
and this was our first real song, without fooling around (the song "locked up" and 2 unuploaded tracks had all come before and all 3 aren't serious) so it's pretty surprising to be on the front page.
This song sucks balls.
This song sucks! first of all, you can't rhyme night with night. I can't believe this song even got on this list. That first kid that rapped like "Gotta say your goodbyes" was pretty good though. You know what? just because that kid was so amazing I'll give this a 10
lol this is k-dog he raps the first verse
u can check out his solo stuff on his page
I have no idea how this got on to the top songs list, much less the top ten. I mean seriously, as I right this review, the score is 2.79 out of 5. It honestly sounds like a bunch of 14-year-olds with stopped up noses decided they would grab a 10 dollar keyboard, looping old RPG music, and downloading generic clapping noises, talk in what they thought was a rhythmic tune, and call it a rap. Try harder next time. ^_^
dammnnn you dissed Musty as well as us
seems like you missed that we're not 14, we didn't use a keyboard or loop old RPG music or download generic clapping noises since that was Musty's (imo) very good beat, not mine
and yea we are rappin in a rhythmic tune, so thanks
I also have a crappy mic, 5th grade memories and rhymezone.com. You didn't even make the background music.
we didn't use rhymezone?
thanks for the site though
I don't feel very much towards someone who just harasses someone after they give you constructive criticism. You honestly think that telling john0208 you, "Did his mum" makes you any more important and him less? He gave you his honest opinion on your music and you just scoff and be rude.
That's unnecessary and just plain idiotic.
I don't see why you would do that, especially when this is a top song.
You should accept criticism and use it towards your next song to get on the list again.
I find the song a bit repetitive and annoying.
But it still has nice lyrics.
Next time, try not to just stretch something,
Especially a cheerless song.
At least put a climax or something other than a repeating loop.
I honestly think it just ruins the piece.
The lyrics are fine quality, just.... The pronunciation could be a bit more pronounced and you should try not to warp the lyrics and provide an echo effect... Especially on this type of a melody.
It makes it blend and sound smushy.
Making it harder and provide more concentration to hear.
And in a rap, that's basically the core to it.
Hearing it and catching the rhymes.
What I do like is the story behind the lyrics.
Having your freedoms stripped and removed as your summer ends and school starts.
Removing your ability to be fun and losing your youth as the years go by.
That's the only reason I'm giving it a six.
thank you for the very helpful review with good criticism
the problem with john0208's review is what it prety much said is that the beat sucked (wasn't mine), our sound quality sucked, and the rapping sucked. with no criticism and just put downs, i decided i'd give him a put down back. it's called giving him a crappy response back. im fine with an honest bad opinion, such as this might be, but as long as its backed up wtih how to do better in the future. otherwise, just please zero-bomb it cause i dont want to hear how we suck and will never be better.
but in return with your review, i've been waiting for a review like this. you gave us great criticism and will be sure to use your advice to try to do better in the future. thanks for the great review man
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.