I also liked the purely instrumental songs, and the experimental ones where the lyrics were nonsense; if you're going to use actual lyrics, I feel there needs to be more focus on them, so they're a distinct lead, readily comprehensible.
Eh, I like the songs that are purely instrumental. I don't know, they seem to fit your MO. I'm not saying this is bad, as a matter of fact, this song is pretty good in a lot of aspects. But the words are kind of a "turn off" for me.
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