WHAT DID YOU DOOOO

my ears hurt

Better than the first...

I'm not sure how I can describe this one. What you definitely need to work on a LOT here is flow. It sounds like you only have about five or so different things happening. That crazy lead riff thing that goes throughout the whole song, a chord looping in 8th beats or so on occasion when the lead plays, one drum pattern, the electric guitar, and the abstract noise at the end. It sounds like it has potential still - but the thing is there's no structure that I can tell. You said you worked on flow, but I really have no idea what's going on in this song. I'm going to message you my e-mail, I'd like a copy of the .flp if you don't mind just so I can try to see what it is that's happening, and maybe see if I can try to make this flow a bit better.

Cows be banging

That devil is one crazy guy! It liked that it was experimental! :D