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its song clip i made a month ago that i forgot to finish..... well im working on it now.....

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Oh hell...
Dude, you're ruining it by not having any melody in your tracks, you just clusterfuck the notes together and that's NOT how anyone produces.
It's like you never listen to music, therefore you don't know what a melody is. I've never heard that much lack of talent in a track from anyone else ever.

Every genre has a melody in it, whether it's a single note throughout the song, notes alternating, or something else, I don't have a real definition of a melody but hopefully you understand what I mean.

Even Gabber/Hardcore music has some melody, even though it's usually very harsh. Point is, you won't get nowhere if you keep clusterfucking notes together. Learn a piano or something, that'll improve your skills and gives great advantage to having good melodies in your tracks.

Also, stop panning shit like that. In other words, keep your shit way less random and more easily acessible (as a beginner) to other listeners, and give room to improve for melodies. people are more likely to give better feedback.
God why am I even bothering... Well I really hope this helps.

seguraf11 responds:

Thx, I really did just throw things in a pattern.... didnt look up any tutorials on FL studio, I got something in the works though

I like this! My only complaint is it hurts my ears a little bit because the high has too much volume. It's great but you have to endure a little pain.

seguraf11 responds:

Maybe your EQ or something is boosting the treble? Dunno, thx for the feedback

The main reason I'm giving this song a five is because I'm wearing headphones and the sound is jumping back and forth between my ears :{ I listened to it the second time without headphones, much better but the song still never progresses anywhere. I think it'll be better once it's finished. Keep working on it :)

seguraf11 responds:

I like songs that actually uses stereo effect to the fullest instead of mostly just mono and some tiny effects in one side or the other

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May 10, 2012
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