This was cool
Well nice job here and this was a cool sound seems like you could have better sharp sounding I want to hear sharper guitars though something this was lacking but still a nice track that you have here you have some good talent here on this and made for a really nice sound but could be even better
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Some sharper sound with the guitar would be cool
its realy good except for those extremely high pitched screechy guitars. if oyu removed those it would be pperfect.
I'm loving it! all chill and catchy!
i really like it
Sapphire Tears Magnetic
I was a bit alarmed at the beginning, thinking the melody was repetitive and generic from the get go. It does remain repetitive, but the instrumentation changing up a tad, helped slightly. I feel as though this beat is kind of weak, especially with the emphasis in the song criteria saying that this approach would not cut it. There are elements of this song that make a good sounding song, I'm just not convinced that it was the best approach for this contest criteria. Did the tempo slow down slightly? I did not like that shift down. That does not perpetuate a feeling of action and excitement. Good effort but I needed to hear more changes, harder pounding beat, and evolution of the melody with different instrumentation. 6.0
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