Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Oct 22, 2008 | 1:11 AM EDT
File Info
3.8 MB
4 min 7 sec
4.38 / 5.00

Related Content

You might also enjoy:

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.38 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
5,426 Plays | 348 Downloads
Share Links:
Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

(Edit: I made a remix of this song... and It's a lot better. Save your reviews for that one! /audio/listen/258349)

You are the reason why my sun goes down

I look at you and I see beauty in the way you move

You harbor life and love, and death just by your every sound

You tell me that you always have one foot suck on the ground

But I know better when you're drifting off into the sea

I've seen my share of shipwrecks, and my share of mutiny

I guess I'll let the ship with red sails leave me my body

My heart goes out with it, I am land locked for eternity

Your ship is going down

I found your letter in the bottle that you sent for me

Mixed in the wreckage next to red sails washed up on the beach

Your message lets me know your final thoughts would rest on me

The next time I see you will be on the floor of the sea

At last you've learned to keep both of your feet stuck on the ground

I hope that what you died for is exactly what you found

And now the ocean is the reason why my sun goes down

My heart was lost with you, and I don't know what to do now

Land Locked for eternity

Your ship is going down



Rated 5 / 5 stars


Like this one and the remix! but in the pulse remix you can't hear the lyrics (wich are btw very beautiful) very well. but it doesn't really matter because i think both songs are fantastic!
-------5/5 10/10 for both songs!!!!!--------


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Love it

I love this one but i like the remix better. they both deserve a rating of ten though i hope that you keep making music !

merlin responds:

Thanks for the review! I'm amazed you think they were both worthy of 10s! A lot more know-how went into the remix, and This version perhaps passes a more saddened tone to it, so they both sort of have different Dynamics.



Rated 5 / 5 stars


No, seriously. This song must live a length of time that is quite longer than what is, was, or will ever be considered short. It must live long.

People find this review helpful!
merlin responds:

It seems either this one (the original) or the remix, always meanders its way to the front page of the techno genre! I feel sorry for anyone who HATES this song.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I Personally Think The Remix Is Better

Thanks for remixing it! :P

merlin responds:

No problem! Hope you voted higher than 5 on the remix :3



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wonderful song...

I listened to about half of the Pulse Remix before having a desire to hear the original, and it's wonderful. Now I'm going to go listen to the rest of the Pulse Remix to see how it compares. :3 5/5, 10/10, likely the same on the other one. Great job.

merlin responds:

Thanks for taking time to see the before and after! I'm glad you enjoy my stuff enough to follow it. It's amazing how well everyone's all the sudden been taking my stuff since it got exposed. It's so exciting, and overwhelming at the same time. Such a euphoric feeling.