Blam.

I wrote a review because, well, I've never seen a submission with such a low score..
And your music, to be honest isn't completely terrible.
But your lyrics and your voice are.

Take some singing lessons, or raping lessons or whatever you crazy kids are into.
Um, I couldn't understand a large majority of your lyrics, but when I heard "your mothers cunt' this review went downhill fast.

i liked it better then the firdst one

the flow in this was a little better
keep trying youll get there

Ya, just work on it.

Good idea, just um, work on the channeling and "Rythim" alittle bit. I don't like fowl mouth music, but to be fair, this is an ok song.

That sucked

The beat was good, but the rapping was lame and not on beat. Keep practicing