I believe you could make the doko dumbeeks in the background more balance and creative.
Overall everything else is cool!
Yeah, initially I thought it'd be neat to have the same beat as a point of reference or somesuch but in retrospect some variation, even such as simple as in dynamics, would've kept things more interesting.
I hate caravans. I like this.
This is a great scenario track. It conjures so many images related to your brief description.
Congratulations on a fine ass submission.
(i said ass to make this review sound more "street" and thus give it a strange sense youth credibility)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.